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Violence and Crime in South Africa and the Prevalence of Trauma
Kelsey Nairn
South African College of Applied Psychology (Pty) Ltd.
Crisis and Trauma Counselling
Samuel Hill
13th July 2020
STUDENT NAME: Kelsey Nairn MARK: 91%
Please note: where the section of the grid is in red, these are the key areas you need to pay attention to, either
continue to do or correct errors.
CRITERIA NOT YET SOMEWHAT COMPETENT ACCOMPLISHED HIGHLY MARK
COMPETENT COMPETENT ACCOMPLISHED
0 - 11 12 - 17 18 - 23 24 - 29 30+ /35
ENGAGEMENT No evidence Some Theory and Theory and Outstanding
WITH of with evidence of literature are literature are engagement
LITERATURE literature engagement engaged engaged with and
AND THEORY and theory but not with and well and incorporation of
engagement sufficient or incorporated incorporated theory and
with not very very well literature 31
literature pertinent
and theory To the topic
or irrelevant
engagement
0 - 25 26 - 32 33 - 38 39 - 44 45+ /50
CONTENT Content Adequate Includes In-depth Outstanding
does not coverage of essential coverage of the coverage of the 46
pertain to topic made aspects of topic with chosen topic
the task or is but some the chosen pertinent and with examples
irrelevant or aspects topic up-to-date and excellent
errors in the unclear information attention to
, 2
portrayal of clearly and detail and deep
the chosen compellingly engagement
topic portrayed
0-1 2-4 5-7 8-9 10+ /10
APA ACADEMIC Many Several Few errors, Very well Outstanding
CONVENTIONS obtrusive errors unobtrusive represented and error-free
[STRUCTURE, errors apparent in errors in near perfect presentation 9
REFERENCING, including references, references, references, and technical
ETC] referencing citation and citation, and citations, etc. aspects
and citation presentation presentation
1 2 3 4 5 /5
STYLE, Wrong Some Awareness of Strong audience Outstanding
AUDIENCE register for evidence but audience is engagement engagement
ENGAGEMENT audience not sufficient evident throughout the with the given 5
or consistent document audience in
mind
TOTAL 91
ADDITIONAL SPECIFIC COMMENTS:
Dear Kelsey, excellent work! You engaged well with the topic, both in terms of flow of thought, coherency of
argument and distinction between theory and modality. Your work is of a very high standard.
To improve mark: Make the introduction and conclusion briefer by simply telling me what you are going to do
[introduction] and what you did [conclusion], this saves on word count.
SAM😊
Violence and Crime in South Africa and the Prevalence of Trauma
Kelsey Nairn
South African College of Applied Psychology (Pty) Ltd.
Crisis and Trauma Counselling
Samuel Hill
13th July 2020
STUDENT NAME: Kelsey Nairn MARK: 91%
Please note: where the section of the grid is in red, these are the key areas you need to pay attention to, either
continue to do or correct errors.
CRITERIA NOT YET SOMEWHAT COMPETENT ACCOMPLISHED HIGHLY MARK
COMPETENT COMPETENT ACCOMPLISHED
0 - 11 12 - 17 18 - 23 24 - 29 30+ /35
ENGAGEMENT No evidence Some Theory and Theory and Outstanding
WITH of with evidence of literature are literature are engagement
LITERATURE literature engagement engaged engaged with and
AND THEORY and theory but not with and well and incorporation of
engagement sufficient or incorporated incorporated theory and
with not very very well literature 31
literature pertinent
and theory To the topic
or irrelevant
engagement
0 - 25 26 - 32 33 - 38 39 - 44 45+ /50
CONTENT Content Adequate Includes In-depth Outstanding
does not coverage of essential coverage of the coverage of the 46
pertain to topic made aspects of topic with chosen topic
the task or is but some the chosen pertinent and with examples
irrelevant or aspects topic up-to-date and excellent
errors in the unclear information attention to
, 2
portrayal of clearly and detail and deep
the chosen compellingly engagement
topic portrayed
0-1 2-4 5-7 8-9 10+ /10
APA ACADEMIC Many Several Few errors, Very well Outstanding
CONVENTIONS obtrusive errors unobtrusive represented and error-free
[STRUCTURE, errors apparent in errors in near perfect presentation 9
REFERENCING, including references, references, references, and technical
ETC] referencing citation and citation, and citations, etc. aspects
and citation presentation presentation
1 2 3 4 5 /5
STYLE, Wrong Some Awareness of Strong audience Outstanding
AUDIENCE register for evidence but audience is engagement engagement
ENGAGEMENT audience not sufficient evident throughout the with the given 5
or consistent document audience in
mind
TOTAL 91
ADDITIONAL SPECIFIC COMMENTS:
Dear Kelsey, excellent work! You engaged well with the topic, both in terms of flow of thought, coherency of
argument and distinction between theory and modality. Your work is of a very high standard.
To improve mark: Make the introduction and conclusion briefer by simply telling me what you are going to do
[introduction] and what you did [conclusion], this saves on word count.
SAM😊
