Class: 2A
Descriptive Text
,A “Oyen”
In my neighborhood, my neighbor gave me a 5-month-old orange Angora cat. When I saw him, he was adorable and charming. He had dense
fur, very large ears and a sharp nose. He have fluffy legs and his tail attracted me. I immediately decided to adopt him and named him Oyen.
When he first arrived at my house, he is not used to be in a new home. Then he got curious and explored every room, from the living room,
bedroom, kitchen, and even the bathroom.
Oyen investigates his new environment thoroughly. With his round eyes, he looks very cute. He is soft, shimmering orange fur shines under
the lamplight, adding to his overall charm. He moves with nimble little steps, looking for something in every corner he finds.
As time went by, Oyen began to adapt to his new surroundings. He found his favorite place in my house,it is my bedroom. Oyen has a
friendly and loving nature. Whenever I wake up in the morning, he always wakes me up and meows at me to ask for food. He is the second
best alarm after my mom. Whenever I came home from college, he always greeted me very quickly. He would run and stop in front of me,
rubbing his head against my leg, giving me warmth and comfort. His presence brought peace and happiness to my home. Oyen was the cutest
cat and the best stress reliever when I was tired.
However, like any young cat, Oyen has an ignorant side. He loves playing with the string hanging on the door, running around and chasing
his own shadow on the wall, or jumping on the table to catch a glimpse of the food placed there. His innocent face always made it difficult for
me to scold him. He is the cat with infinite energy in my house. Oyen also loved playing with various cat toys. He would roll his body while
playing with a small yellow ping pong ball, sometimes nimbly kicking it with his tiny legs. I often laugh at his funny behavior, and that is
when Oyen looks the happiest.
When night falls, Oyen always sleeps on the bed near me. Oyen turned into a calm cat. He enjoys sleeping by my side. As I gently stroked his
fur, he pretended to sleep, his closed eyes conveying a sense of security. His voice is soft, silky purr makes me feel calm, and I know Oyen
feels the same way.
As the days passed, Oyen has grown into an adult cat. His orange fur still looked beautiful and shiny, his eyes became sharp. Despite having
reached adulthood, he remained loyal to me. He started looking for a female cat to continue his progeny. Oyen adventures all day to gain
territory and find female cats. Although Oyen loves to explore, he still remembered where he lived and where he ate. The older he got, the
friendlier he became to me and my family.
In this story, Oyen has become more than just a pet cat. He has become part of my family. In sickness and in health, we have always taken
good care of him.
, Analysis of Verb tenses
B
Object / Complement
Clause/Sentence Subject Verb
Object Adverb of… Complement Note
In my neighborhood, my neighbor gave me a 5-month-old In my Positive
my neighbor gave orange Angora cat. neighborhood, sentence (+)
me a 5-month-old (place)
orange Angora cat.
When I saw the cat, I saw the cat, when (time) and (conjunction) (+)
it was adorable and
charming. it was adorable
charming.
He had dense fur, He had fur very (degree) dense (adjective) (+)
very large ears and a ears
sharp nose a sharp nose large (adjective)
and (conjunction)
He have fluffy legs He have legs fluffy (adjective) (+)
and tail attracted me.
his attracted tail and (conjunction)
me.
Descriptive Text
,A “Oyen”
In my neighborhood, my neighbor gave me a 5-month-old orange Angora cat. When I saw him, he was adorable and charming. He had dense
fur, very large ears and a sharp nose. He have fluffy legs and his tail attracted me. I immediately decided to adopt him and named him Oyen.
When he first arrived at my house, he is not used to be in a new home. Then he got curious and explored every room, from the living room,
bedroom, kitchen, and even the bathroom.
Oyen investigates his new environment thoroughly. With his round eyes, he looks very cute. He is soft, shimmering orange fur shines under
the lamplight, adding to his overall charm. He moves with nimble little steps, looking for something in every corner he finds.
As time went by, Oyen began to adapt to his new surroundings. He found his favorite place in my house,it is my bedroom. Oyen has a
friendly and loving nature. Whenever I wake up in the morning, he always wakes me up and meows at me to ask for food. He is the second
best alarm after my mom. Whenever I came home from college, he always greeted me very quickly. He would run and stop in front of me,
rubbing his head against my leg, giving me warmth and comfort. His presence brought peace and happiness to my home. Oyen was the cutest
cat and the best stress reliever when I was tired.
However, like any young cat, Oyen has an ignorant side. He loves playing with the string hanging on the door, running around and chasing
his own shadow on the wall, or jumping on the table to catch a glimpse of the food placed there. His innocent face always made it difficult for
me to scold him. He is the cat with infinite energy in my house. Oyen also loved playing with various cat toys. He would roll his body while
playing with a small yellow ping pong ball, sometimes nimbly kicking it with his tiny legs. I often laugh at his funny behavior, and that is
when Oyen looks the happiest.
When night falls, Oyen always sleeps on the bed near me. Oyen turned into a calm cat. He enjoys sleeping by my side. As I gently stroked his
fur, he pretended to sleep, his closed eyes conveying a sense of security. His voice is soft, silky purr makes me feel calm, and I know Oyen
feels the same way.
As the days passed, Oyen has grown into an adult cat. His orange fur still looked beautiful and shiny, his eyes became sharp. Despite having
reached adulthood, he remained loyal to me. He started looking for a female cat to continue his progeny. Oyen adventures all day to gain
territory and find female cats. Although Oyen loves to explore, he still remembered where he lived and where he ate. The older he got, the
friendlier he became to me and my family.
In this story, Oyen has become more than just a pet cat. He has become part of my family. In sickness and in health, we have always taken
good care of him.
, Analysis of Verb tenses
B
Object / Complement
Clause/Sentence Subject Verb
Object Adverb of… Complement Note
In my neighborhood, my neighbor gave me a 5-month-old In my Positive
my neighbor gave orange Angora cat. neighborhood, sentence (+)
me a 5-month-old (place)
orange Angora cat.
When I saw the cat, I saw the cat, when (time) and (conjunction) (+)
it was adorable and
charming. it was adorable
charming.
He had dense fur, He had fur very (degree) dense (adjective) (+)
very large ears and a ears
sharp nose a sharp nose large (adjective)
and (conjunction)
He have fluffy legs He have legs fluffy (adjective) (+)
and tail attracted me.
his attracted tail and (conjunction)
me.
