PART I: ESSAY WRITING
TASK 1 – ESSAY OUTLINE
Introduction
Whether teachers and scientists are the finest candidates, or whether those with lucrative
occupations and high incomes are intended to be the most successful, is still a contentious
issue in the modern world
Thesis Statement
The idea that Malaysians who make a lot of money are the most successful neglects the
fact that true success should be measured by one's impact on society, regardless of their
occupation or income level.
Body
Point 1 - people often choose wealth and fame over other considerations
Supporting Detail - community concentrates only on wealth and prosperity, billionaires are
viewed as successful members of society
Example - Bill Gates, one of the top ten richest people in the world, created Microsoft, and he is
considered a legend by many
Point 2 - they have become more successful through their substantial financial gains
Supporting Detail - they are the most successful because their significant contribution is still
undeniable, even though their contribution may not be as crystal-clear as the fore-mentioned
ones.
Example-they might generate thousands of jobs that would help mitigate the unemployment rate
Point 3 -motivation may be for a higher purpose, such as dedicating their valuable time to a
particular academic topic
Supporting Detail - The secret to achieving this aim is gratitude, because nobody can forecast the
future and everyone has a different beginning in life
, Example- the invention of the Internet both helps the inventors feel a sense of accomplishment
and causes more comfort and ease in every person's life
Point 4- contribution made by scientists or teachers are of the greatest ways to leave a legacy for
children.
Supporting Detail – those who have to undergo rigorous training education to acquire deeper
knowledge to disseminate for other people, are likely to educate children to become talented
people to contribute to the nation
Example- teachers might not make considerable profits as others, they are still defined as
accomplished people since they can teach their students to become good people.
Conclusion
- although earning a lot of money without contributing to society can make you successful and
famous, what you give back to society will be more useful in making the world a better place
TASK 1 – ESSAY OUTLINE
Introduction
Whether teachers and scientists are the finest candidates, or whether those with lucrative
occupations and high incomes are intended to be the most successful, is still a contentious
issue in the modern world
Thesis Statement
The idea that Malaysians who make a lot of money are the most successful neglects the
fact that true success should be measured by one's impact on society, regardless of their
occupation or income level.
Body
Point 1 - people often choose wealth and fame over other considerations
Supporting Detail - community concentrates only on wealth and prosperity, billionaires are
viewed as successful members of society
Example - Bill Gates, one of the top ten richest people in the world, created Microsoft, and he is
considered a legend by many
Point 2 - they have become more successful through their substantial financial gains
Supporting Detail - they are the most successful because their significant contribution is still
undeniable, even though their contribution may not be as crystal-clear as the fore-mentioned
ones.
Example-they might generate thousands of jobs that would help mitigate the unemployment rate
Point 3 -motivation may be for a higher purpose, such as dedicating their valuable time to a
particular academic topic
Supporting Detail - The secret to achieving this aim is gratitude, because nobody can forecast the
future and everyone has a different beginning in life
, Example- the invention of the Internet both helps the inventors feel a sense of accomplishment
and causes more comfort and ease in every person's life
Point 4- contribution made by scientists or teachers are of the greatest ways to leave a legacy for
children.
Supporting Detail – those who have to undergo rigorous training education to acquire deeper
knowledge to disseminate for other people, are likely to educate children to become talented
people to contribute to the nation
Example- teachers might not make considerable profits as others, they are still defined as
accomplished people since they can teach their students to become good people.
Conclusion
- although earning a lot of money without contributing to society can make you successful and
famous, what you give back to society will be more useful in making the world a better place
