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AQA-7707-1-ENGLISH LANGUAGE AND LITERATURE FINAL MARK SCHEME PAPER 1_TELLING STORIES-A LEVEL-Jul2024. Indicative content Q2: Read the extract printed below. This is from the section of the novel where Walton writes to his sister about his planned voyage to the North Pole. Explore the significance of characters’ ambitions in the novel. You should consider: • the presentation of characters’ ambitions in the extract below and at different points in the novel • the use of fantasy elements in constructing a fictional world. [35 marks] AO2 Students might refer to: AO1 Students might refer to: • extract – personal ambitions presented through the homodiegetic perspective of Walton in letter form • time scale as indication of dedication • Walton’s reflections on specific moment his ambitions began • excitement due to imminence of the task • Walton’s commitment to his personal goal • Walton’s perception of his own personal character • ambition presented as a quest • the requirement to overcome difficulties and obstacles • intellectual capacity as a benefit to an ambitious character • academic fields associated with intellect and ambition • Walton’s pride balanced with modesty • the need of encouragement from others to achieve ambitions • any other interpretation(s) offered. • use of first person pronoun I and possessive determiner my to reflect inner thoughts and feelings • temporal phrase: six years • mental verb process: remember and noun phrase: the hour • abstract noun: undertaking pre-modified by adjective: present • preposition: about and infinitive verb: to proceed • mental verb processes: dedicated, devoted • possessive determiner: my and abstract noun fortitude • noun phrase: naval adventurer • collocation: long and difficult • semantic field of endurance: endured, hardship, demand, difficult, sustain • semantic field of physical suffering: cold, famine, thirst, want of sleep • syndetic list and parallelism in phrases: the study of mathematics, the theory of medicine, those branches of physical science • noun phrases: mathematics, medicine, physical science • modality in must own • adjective: proud, pre-modified by determiner: a little • semantic field of success: deserve, glory, valuable • exclamatory: Oh, that… affirmative! • metaphors: hopes fluctuate, spirits…depressed, raise the spirits of others • rhetorical question: Do I not deserve...? 000017 Page 17 of 44 ENGLISH LANGUAGE AND LITERATURE MARK SCHEME – A-LEVEL ENGLISH LANGUAGE AND LITERATURE – 7707/1 – JUNE 2024 18 AO3 • 19th century ideas about discovery and travel • 19th century attitudes towards science and religion • Mary Shelley’s personal ambitions • the connection of travel writing to the gothic genre • the use of letter writing to explore fears and character flaws • quests as a convention of the fantasy genre • relevant references to literary critical and non-academic readings from a variety of theoretical stances. Possible choice of extracts are listed below. Examiners, however, must be prepared to credit other valid choices: The novel includes many possible extracts. Below are a few suggestions: • Letter 1 – Walton’s ambition to be a poet and reach the North Pole • CH2 – Victor’s longing to understand the physical nature of life • CH10 – monster’s ambitions to learn language

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Mark schemes are prepared by the Lead Assessment Writer and considered, together with the relevant
questions, by a panel of subject teachers. This mark scheme includes any amendments made at the
standardisation events which all associates participate in and is the scheme which was used by them in
this examination. The standardisation process ensures that the mark scheme covers the students’
responses to questions and that every associate understands and applies it in the same correct way. As
preparation for standardisation each associate analyses a number of students’ scripts. Alternative
answers not already covered by the mark scheme are discussed and legislated for. If, after the
standardisation process, associates encounter unusual answers which have not been raised they are
required to refer these to the Lead Examiner.




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It must be stressed that a mark scheme is a working document, in many cases further developed and
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schemes on the basis of one year’s document should be avoided; whilst the guiding principles of




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assessment remain constant, details will change, depending on the content of a particular examination
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No student should be disadvantaged on the basis of their gender identity and/or how they refer to the
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exam responses in line with existing mark scheme criteria.
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English Language and Literature Mark Scheme

How to Mark
Aims

When you are marking your allocation of scripts your main aims should be to:

• recognise and identify the achievements of students
• place students in the appropriate mark band and in the appropriate part of that mark scheme (high,
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This specification is underpinned by the belief that the best form of literary criticism is rooted in a rigorous
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might be drawing on different areas of linguistics, or on different ideas about classifying language. They
therefore may use a term that is different from what an examiner might normally expect but it is in the
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spirit of this specification that we accept a range of ideas and approaches as long as they are
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grounded in precise descriptive analysis.
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Assessment Objectives
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This component requires students to:
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AO1: Apply concepts and methods from integrated linguistic and literary study as appropriate, using
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associated terminology and coherent written expression
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AO2: Analyse ways in which meanings are shaped in texts
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AO3: Demonstrate understanding of the significance and influence of the contexts in which texts are
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AO4: Explore connections across texts, informed by linguistic and literary concepts and methods

AO5: Demonstrate expertise and creativity in the use of English to communicate in different ways.
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Level of response marking instructions
Level of response mark schemes are broken down into levels, each of which has a descriptor. The
descriptor for the level shows the average performance for the level. There are marks in each level.

Before you apply the mark scheme to a student’s answer read through the answer and annotate it (as
instructed) to show the qualities that are being looked for. You can then apply the mark scheme.

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descriptor for that level. The descriptor for the level indicates the different qualities that might be seen in
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meets this level, and so on, until you have a match between the level descriptor and the answer. With
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When assigning a level you should look at the overall quality of the answer and not look to pick holes in
small and specific parts of the answer where the student has not performed quite as well as the rest. If
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approach for defining the level and then use the variability of the response to help decide the mark within
the level, ie if the response is predominantly level 3 with a small amount of level 4 material it would be
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Step 2 Determine a mark
Indicative content in the mark scheme is provided as a guide for examiners. It is not intended to be
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exhaustive and you must credit other valid points. Students do not have to cover all of the points
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mentioned in the Indicative content to reach the highest level of the mark scheme.
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Annotating scripts
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It is vital that the way you arrive at a mark should be recorded on the script. This will help you with
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making accurate judgements and it will help any subsequent markers to identify how you are thinking,
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should adjustment need to be made. To this end you should:
• use the relevant emarker2 annotation commenting on the answer’s relationship to the Assessment
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Objectives
• write a summative comment at the end for each Assessment Objective
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unprofessional and it impedes a positive marking approach.
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Distribution of Assessment Objectives and Weightings
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The table below is a reminder of which Assessment Objectives will be tested by the questions and
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Question 1 15 15 10 40
Questions 2–9 10 10 15 35
Questions 10–17 15 10 25
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